Main characters: Captain Captain Ahab from Moby Dick and Victor Frankenstein from Frankenstein
It
has been seven days since we left port victor and me are sailing to the
deppest part of the ocean to find the whail that took my fathers life.
victor is with me to find the wail to he will take the wail wonce it is
dead and bring it back to his hometown where he was banished and prove
to them that he is a great scientist and will bring the life back into
the whale. me on the outher hand i am trying to find and kill the whale
for my father. back ten years ago my father was out trying to catch this
wery whail, it was drak at nighe with a smoky atmosphere he wasd
looking port side when he saw the whail he throw the shpere at it and it
hit him in the back my dad tyed the rope to the mast hoping to catch it
and bring it back to shore, but the whail was strong and broke the mast
and jumped out of the water higher than the boat rite down on my dad
eating him hole so im here too get venges on that whail. me and victor
the next day are out looking for the whail we see no evidence of the
whail but we know he is close an olsd sailor told victor that the whail
is close when you see the water turn dark dark blue. victor is a smar
scientist he new how to fix enething and make evrething. i was out on
port one day looking in me telescope and i droped it but he took it rite
awaw and fixed up even better than befor. we were both eating dinner
one day one sudnely the boat started to shake we ran out to port and
automatically know who it was, the whail had his our shipe we quickly
grabed are harpoon guns and started to hit it with then. harpoon after
harpoon we hit this animal, but it would not stop it just keeped on
comeing hit afrer hit are ship wouldent be able to take enemore. what
should we do victor askedi i told him the only thing to do was sphere
him in the blow hole, i took aim and lunged my harpoon..... direct hit
straight in the blow hole, that wouldent come out eney time soon i
grabed the rope that conected it and tied it the the most stirty part of
the ship. victor ran to the mast and tied up the rope, he went to go
stear the ship makijg shure the whail wouldent capsize the ship futher
and further in to the bark blue water we went. hopefully the beast would
tire out and let us take it, but the fight went on for three days day
and night. finally the next morning it started to slow down evenshuly to
a stop, and when it stoped we killed the beats. niw its body layed a
flot moshinless. victor had the most hard job of them all, he had to
jump over bord landing on the whail hoping not to fall off in the shark
infested water, tie a lasso around it. and he did like no problem and
soon we were off to home. throught the trip home victor was up all nite
studing the whail taking samples, he must have been very happy he showed
me a small example of the experiment he would do. he took me to his
work place and stuck two medal poles in the part of the whail and to my
suprize it started to move! i told him that if this emperament works he
would be the greatest scientists eaver to walk the planet. Me on the
outher hand i got the satisfaction of geting revenge on that whail that
killed my father. when we arived at the port there was a small crow of
pll waitinh for us. victor and i were in vited to the next town meeting
to tell them about are experience. victor and me went are sepret ways he
went back to his town and is now the greatest scientists eaver to walk
the earth and i here he almost can revive the dead! me on the outher
hand went back on my boat to travel the world and find a mises for my
self we hope to see each outher in the near futer. well thats are story.
BY- Aquan Myers
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